Concept crit 18/01/12
Strengths//
- In depth annotation on storyboards which give clear direction
- Good wide target audience
Areas for improvement//
- Consider sound: can relate the sequence to sound (timings)
- Make clear in the title sequence what a bucket list is. Define and emphasise definition
- Mix image and text, dont just keep it seperate frames
Considerations//
- Not sure the font is suited to the topic area
- Also it changes from sans serif to serif throughout.. could stay same/ similar
- Walking motion.. will need to make it appear realistic in order to work, not look cliche
- Can be hard, maybe dont show legs
- One second gaps between frames may be too long
- Perhaps be quite subtle and not give away much on the title sequence
Additional comments//
- Do necessarily need to include your 'Top 10' throughout the sequence (will give away programme)
Year Three Personal and Professional Development work can be found under label OUPD301.
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