Concept crit//
Strengths:
- Ideas to have it drawn out in the sequence sounds interesting, ask how to do it
Areas for improvement:
- Instead of including all 10 things in 10 seconds (idents), try to use just one so its not an overload of information.
- Dont need to much information on the sequences as you dont want to give too much away.
- Could be nice to just have illustration, title and what the illustration is of.
Considerations:
- Check out the YouTube guy doing bucket list of things to raise money for charity (Irish guy).
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