This crit is for the packaging task of our 'good'.
Strengths//
- Like designs
- Logo well thought out
- Like the colours
- The logo cutout in the bottle neck works well, looks good
Areas for improvement//
- Needs more continuity
- Needs a bit more refinement on the curves of type
- Have something on the inside
- Consider the inside more
- Consider stock
- Could cover the whole packaging in polka dots
Additional comments//
- Could possibly cut out a few polka dots
- Logo is interesting but quite complicated, doesnt work as well small
- Could have punched out holes with solid colour inside
- Try using grids when putting the polka dots together so they line up more perfect
- Look at pop up business cards
Year Three Personal and Professional Development work can be found under label OUPD301.
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